Preliminary Task - Completed and Evaluation

I feel that my preliminary task turned out not to be the worst, and somehow arrived neater than I had expected. But the question is, is it good enough? The main task looks hard. Considering the amount of things which could be considered in a school magazine, thinking about concentrating on the whole of the music industry is surprisingly scary in my mind. During the course of the preliminary task, I feel that I worked terribly slow, so obviously I need to plan out a lot more first and spend a lot more time on my main task ahead of me. There will be many more things to take into account. My school magazine front cover can be engaging in ways such as encouraging students to get involved. There are also revision tips mentioned, which could be a reason for them to like the magazine, in ways that they could improve their grades. My final results are as shown: